THE PROMISE
by Lupe Franco Bloch
PROLOGUE
- ROBERTO
Roberto Garcia rushed up the wooden steps of his house on
Bunkerhill Avenue where he lived with his mama Regina and
younger brother Tony.
He was
late, a large order at the meat market had come in at the
last minute and he had to work overtime. His thoughts ran
together, put away the notes I wrote down at work; get cleaned
up and pick up Ana, then go for a quick supper before we
go to the Club. I want to win the jitterbug contest tonight,
it will be our third win. We gotta’ win.
His
mamá, Regina, was in the kitchen, “Come have
supper, Roberto, I’ll wait for Tony and eat with him.
“No,
Ma, we’re going for a quick supper at La Placita before
the dance. Ma, I’m going to propose tonight.”
Oh,
Roberto, I’m so glad, but you don’t have a ring.
You can have mine, I’ll get it for you.”
“Ma,
I don’t want your ring, it was the last present papa
gave you.”
“It’s
okay, I want you to have it.”
“I’m
going to save money for a year and we’re going to
have a wonderful wedding, we’ll invite the whole vecindad.
But if I don’t save the money, it will be a quick
trip to City Hall.”
“Okay,
but for now take my ring, come with me.”
Roberto followed her to her room where she pulled a shoebox
covered with flowered paper from the shelf. She took a small
jeweler’s box and gave it to Roberto, “Open
it.”
“This
is a beautiful ring, Ma, are you sure?”
“Yeah,
I don’t need it.”
“Tell
you what, on our first anniversary I’ll buy Ana her
own ring and give this one back to you, okay? With my job
at the meat market I can support her and maybe a couple
of kids.” He smiled at the thought of having two children
who looked like Ana.
“Sure,
that’s fine.” Regina smiled; she wouldn’t
mind having a couple of little boys or girls with Roberto’s
black, curly hair and Ana’s green eyes and freckles.
Roberto
put the ring in his wallet but tonight it would be on Ana’s
finger.
He took
a quick bath and dressed in black slacks, white shirt and
a casual black jacket. What he really needed was a car;
he had to ride the red streetcar to work at the Grand Central
Market all the way to Broadway. If they were going dancing
at the Club his friends Mike and Sara picked them up.
He felt
in his pockets for his notes then remembered that he had
put them in the pocket of his brown sport coat for safekeeping.
“Mamá,
where are you?”
“In
the kitchen, where else?”
He kissed
her cheek and thanked her again for the ring.
He hurried off to pick up Ana.
After
a quick dinner at La Placita they took a taxi the few blocks
to the Club. Roberto seemed a little more excited than usual.
“Are
you excited about your birthday next week?” she asked.
“No,”
“Well,
I feel your excitement. What is it?”
“That’s
my secret.” His voice sounded breathless and excited.
“Sweetheart,
wait by the door.” He tried to disengage her arm but
she wouldn’t let go.
He laughed,
“Okay you win.
She
hugged her coat close against the chilly October air and
clung to his arm while he bought the tickets.
When
they entered the softly lit ballroom, the band was still
tuning up. They joined their friends Mike and Sara at their
usual table near the bandstand.
"Glad
you could make it," Mike greeted them.
Sara
patted the chair next to her for Ana.
While
the girls admired each other's hairdos and dresses, Mike
whispered to Roberto, "Have you asked her yet?"
Roberto
winked and pointed to his breast pocket where he kept his
wallet. Ana noticed and realized that explained his excitement.
"Are
you guys going to win tonight's contest?" Sara asked.
"Of
course, don't we always?" Roberto teased.
"That's
why Mike doesn't want to enter anymore," Sara shrugged
and they laughed at the shared standing joke.
Roberto
helped Ana with her coat and draped it over the back of
her chair. He felt a light tap on his shoulder, a man whispered
something and Roberto nodded.
The
lights dimmed and the band began a soft, slow bolero. He
took her hand and held out his arms and Ana slipped into
them. He danced her out to the middle of the floor and whispered,
“I have something to ask you later, Ana.”
She
pulled away and looked into his smiling face, “Now,
ask me now.”
“Later.”
She
sighed and nestled against his shoulder, happy just to be
in his arms. He buried his face in her lemon-scented hair.
Roberto
loved to dance all styles of dances especially the jitterbug.
Ana followed his moves easily. They were the crowd's favorite
couple.
Roberto
couldn't hide his excitement. Mike knew that he was going
to propose to Ana that night. Roberto had whispered that
he had his mamá's engagement ring in his pocket.
She
sighed and nestled against his shoulder, happy just knowing
that something wonderful was going to happen later. Roberto
buried his face in her lemon-scented hair. When the music
ended they returned to their table. Roberto stood behind
Ana's chair and kissed the top of her head.
"I'll
be back in five minutes,"
Ana
watched him weave his way between the couples who still
lingered on the dance floor, everyone liked her happy-go-lucky
boyfriend but she adored him. She turned to talk with Sara.
Roberto
ran down the wooden planks that served as the steps of the
Crystal Club. He wondered who wanted to meet him outside
and why. He was happy and carefree except this, who wanted
to meet him outside and why? Did someone suspect him? He
patted his inside jacket pocket for his notes then remembered
he had stashed them in his brown sport coat.
At the
bottom of the steps he called, "Hey man, que pasa?"
No one
answered. He walked toward the shadows near the entrance
to the alley wondering. Why is he hiding in the shadows?
"Oh
well," but as he turned to go back to the club he sensed
someone behind him, a rough voice growled in his ear, "You
think you're hot stuff, don't you?"
"Hell
no, I'm not hot stuff. What do you want? My money?"
"No,
but that's a good idea."
"You
can have my ten bucks and let me go."
"Oh,
yeah,"
Roberto
thought someone is playing a joke on me. Then felt a sharp
jab in his back, he tried to turn around, but the knife
went in again and again. "Ay, ay, ahh," he cried
and fell face down on the cracked, dirty asphalt.
Deft
hands quickly went through his pockets and tossed his empty
wallet into a pool of Roberto's blood.
After
a while Ana wondered out loud, "What's taking him so
long?" Tapping her foot nervously she craned her neck
over the dancer's heads looking for him. She knew Roberto
was planning to propose that night and she was ready to
accept, in fact she had been crazy about him since she first
saw him at Central Junior High.
"He'll
be right back, don't worry," Sara said.
"Yeah,
I know. He doesn't want to miss the contest. He taught me
to dance the jitterbug, but I barely manage to keep up with
him."
"What
do you mean, 'barely manage' you still 'manage' to win,
don't you?" For a moment Ana forgot to worry.
The
blare of a trumpet blasted the first notes of a corrido,
and feet stamped and cheers went up as dancers scrambled
to the dance floor. Ana watched the dancers and wished Roberto
hadn't gone out.
Mike
returned from talking to some friends, "Roberto back
yet?"
Ana
shook her head.
"I'll
find him," Mike headed for the exit.
The
music ended and couples returned to their tables. The boys
hot and sweaty wiped their faces with their handkerchiefs.
The girls fanned themselves with their tiny evening bags.
Ana
waited and worried, Roberto had never done this before.
"Has
he asked you yet?" Sara asked.
"No,
but he said he wanted to ask me something later."
"He'll
be right back, I'm sure he's planning to win another dance
contest tonight."
Minutes
later a murmur like a gentle wave began at the door and
became a giant roar as it reached every corner of the hall.
"There's a dead man outside!"
Ana
and Sara ran along with everyone else. At the door they
met Mike coming in, “Ana, don’t go out there.”
“Where’s
Roberto? Is it Roberto?”
"Yeah,"
he wrapped his arms around her to keep her from going outside,
but she slipped out and pushed her way down the steps. The
police tried to keep her away.
"It's
Roberto, my boyfriend," she cried.
She
knelt beside him, "Roberto, Roberto," caressing
his bleeding face where the sharp, broken pieces of asphalt
had cut into his skin. She kissed his hand and held it to
her face, sobbing his name over and over. A policeman motioned
to Mike to take her away, and pointed toward the police
car. Mike helped her up and led her to the car.
He and
Sara kept a protective arm around her until a policeman
walked over with a pad and pencil. He stood in front of
Ana. "Miss, I need your name and address, please."
After
he had the information from all three, he said, "Miss,
I'm sorry about your boyfriend."
Mike
hurried the girls to his car. "We have to get to Tony's
before he and his mamá hear about it from the cops."